Friday, 26 September 2014

Monster book marks.

My Reflection
This is me and my buddy having fun making book marks monster book marks
I found it easy because I learnt it before my buddy came after I learnt.
I need to improve my cutting

Wednesday, 24 September 2014

LRRH -Wolf's Point of View


I am learning to write from another character's point of view

I had just woken up I said. I lunged out of bed "mmmmmmmm pancakes" "No pancake mix" mum said
"go to the mall"
"Ok"
(bbbbbbrrrrrrrrruuuuuuuuuummmmm splutter splutter sccccccccrrrrrrrreeeeeeee)
"OH NO THE CAR"
"Never mind dear go to that little girls grandma"
I had just got onto the path when a little girl stuffed cupcakes in her mouth ill tell your grandma (3 minutes later)
"granny your little girl is eating your cupcakes"
(trip)
"oops ... oh no I ate granny... I cant let little red know"
(12 cupcakes later)
"Hello granny the wolf ate all my cupcakes for you no I err he didn't"
of corse he di..."
"oops"
and that is my story.
My Reflection:
I did well on my speech marks and punctuation 
I need to work on making it longer

Taster lunch

My Reflection:
We had the taster lunch for world peace day.
the food tasted good my advice would be to maybe to make sure to name what ingredients are in the food.

A golden morning

5:30 am (snore snore)
"WAKE UP"
"AHH" I yelped as dad explained that it was a rowing race (30 minutes later)
"finally at the start"
"3 2 1 GO!"
"We are in first place"
the boat speed faster than a jaguar
"STAIR STRAIT" dad yelled
the rudder turned
"PERFECT"
the boat turned as we came up on the green pole and turned fast like a jack rabbit running wild for carrots.FWOOSH we were faster than a speeding bullet we shot the eight down the river turned around the pole and shot down to the finish line .
"YAHOO WE WON FIRST PLACE GOLD IM SO HAPPY"