Friday, 1 August 2014

kauri speech

in ten years from now kauri may be extinct if we don't help now hi my name is callum  and my speech is on kauri dieback
f1: did you know over 5000 kauri trees have been killed already
f2:how to stop it:is whenever you go into a kauri infested forest clean your shoes equipment and boots
f3:the soil is infected thats how it spreads on boots equipment and shoes
f4:composting does not remove the disease but it kills weeds that carry it
f5:kauri has been protected for a loooooooong time

well its my time to say goodbye and keep clean.
My reflection:
I did well on choosing my topic and exclaiming. I need to work on my timing
and being slower.

3 comments:

Anonymous said...

Hi Callum good work on your speech. I think you could put more effort into making your paragraphs longer,not repeating yourself and making your paragraphs make sence.

Anonymous said...

Hi Callum good work on your speech. I think you could put more effort into making your paragraphs longer,not repeating yourself and making your paragraphs make sence.

Ben H said...

I like how u told all of us that our native tree (the kauri)
I going extinct and u told us how to stop contamination